Sunday, 27 March 2011
Mind's eye - (Inspired by Roger Allen Baut's picture)
Reflection draws the eye,
a shining point of white light,
surrounded, by silver grey,
glittering sharp above,
rippled blue and watermark,
focus smudges behind,
leading on to sparkling touches,
no horizon, a watery feel, for sure,
Opening my mind,
I see cats eyes, looking at me,
rail tracks of blue, painted carelessly,
a world revealed, quartz topped mountains,
rising above, a sea of ink and blue cloud,
hiding its inhabitants, from our prying eyes.
(Posted for One Shot Sunday - A Poetry Challenge)
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I love this take on the picture. Great stuff!
ReplyDeleteVivid imagination and the power of how mind can work, making abstract almost real, great piece of work.
ReplyDeletei like what your imagination sees beyond the eyes...what could be if only we could see...
ReplyDeleteLove your imagination!
ReplyDeletelimitless space
I like this one, different thinking track!
ReplyDeleteThankyou all for your very kind comments :)
ReplyDeleteYou've painted the photograph with your clever descriptive poem Abigail! Loved it!
ReplyDeletewell done!
ReplyDeleteWonderful work, made me smile. =)
ReplyDeleteThankyou for further lovely comments :)
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